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Novel Writing – Editing and The Ripple Effect

Posted on November 6, 2017 by Wayne

Another of my weekly updates on the progress of my debut crime novel, Safe Hands, about an ageing safe cracker forced out of retirement for the sake of his dying wife and a son that hates his guts.

Last week was all about getting my productivity back on track but the theme for this week has been trying to keep the story itself on the rails.

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The Ripple Effect

My second draft continues to take shape and a huge part of that has been the structural overhaul I’ve been pushing ahead with. It’s all about the ripple effect for me this week. What do I mean by that? Read on . . .

I finished the new chapter between Mickey and his estranged son, but also spent a lot of time editing other chapters and continuing to refine the structure of the book.  Well, for anyone that’s used Scrivener to write their books, you’ll know one of its biggest strengths is giving you the ability to easily drag chapters and scenes around to change the order of things and generally play with the structure of your story. But what you don’t tend to think about are the repercussions involved.

Great Scott, Marty!

Honestly, I feel like I’m involved in a remake of Back To The Future or Twelve Monkeys – thinking about how one change to an event in the past will ripple down through time changing everything in the present. And it isn’t just in terms of practical things, like keeping an eye out for when characters refer to an event that may now not be happening for several chapters – or actually happened two chapters earlier – but also maintaining the emotional consistency of your characters. For example, in my novel, Mickey loses someone close to him. Originally this happened very early in the story and had an effect on how Mickey behaved and felt in the subsequent chapters.

After analyzing my structure, I realized this event would have more impact later on in the book – but now all the chapters in between need to be tweaked to reflect that change in Mickey’s emotional state. It’s complicated, thought intensive work but I know my story will be better because if it. This is just one of the reasons that many authors plan their stories meticulously before starting to write a novel. In the most recent episode of The Joined Up Writing Podcast, I chatted to Thriller author, Rachel Amphlett about her writing process. She, like me, describes herself as a ‘Plotser’ (actually, I always preferred ‘Planster’, but you get the idea). Either way, when I start work on my next novel, I think I need to put a little more emphasis on planning and structure.

That was the week that was . . .

So, it’s been a busy week as I’ve tried to wrestle the book into some kind of shape. It’s getting there, slowly but surely. I was 30 minutes off my 3 hour target again this week, making it two weeks in a row I’ve failed to make the grade. Note for this week: MUST TRY HARDER.

Meanwhile  my writing buddy, Maria Smith, has been achieving her goals despite doing her best to sabotage her own plans! Head over to First Draft Cafe to see what I mean.

What about your writing? How do you approach structural changes in your story? Do you use Scrivener in the same way? Maybe you do all of the grunt work before you even get started? What sort of issues have you faced during the editing phase? I’d love to hear about it, so let me know in the comments or drop me a line on Twitter @MrKelly2u.

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4 thoughts on “Novel Writing – Editing and The Ripple Effect”

  1. Maria Smith (@mariaAsmith) says:
    November 6, 2017 at 8:20 am

    Ah, Wayne, the ripple effect, I’m SO looking forward to it in my own novel…cause-and-effect and how we deal with it, is without doubt tricky. Keep wading through the treacle, your story will be all the better for it.

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    1. Wayne says:
      November 7, 2017 at 8:19 am

      For sure – slowly coming into focus like the first time you put your contact lenses in! Can’t wait to see how your next draft unfolds.

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  2. keith679 says:
    November 9, 2017 at 1:51 pm

    Good article in December’s Writing Mag on ‘Writing Wrongs’ and the five most destructive creative writing myths. Its a tricky one backtracking, but sometimes unavoidable, because no matter how meticulously you plan and write your synopses for chapters, the mould of the novel will change to some degree as you work on it.

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    1. Wayne says:
      November 14, 2017 at 1:21 pm

      Thanks for commenting, Keith. Apologies missed this the first time around. Yes, backtracking is definitely unavoidable – but I guess its effects could be mitigated with a solid outline. Unfortunately, so far, I haven’t found that to be a fun way for me to write. Looking forward to hearing your latest novel soon, though.

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